So i was sent a message from a girl who some how found me. (idk how.)
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Thats her song.
Heres mine. It seem really bad in comparison, but i also made it less than 30 min ago 
The snare in mine is a bit dirty in the beginning. Sorry… Fixed???
http://soundation.com/user/dopey39/track/the-works-edit-4
^fourth edit.
I love this kind of stuff. Great find!
Not bad, I like it. I had a done a little song sometime ago. I was asked to make a soundtrack for a friend’s short film. That’s what I gave him, tell me what you think
So I just listened to sword’s, that girl’s and guibo’s songs. I have a few constructive criticism if you would like to learn more or at least find out what my opinion on it is. Now in a musicians point of view, I will explain what I though was good and what could be fixed. First I’ll talk bout sword’s song.
Sword your song had potential but you just weren’t able to put it together the way it should be done. You weren’t adding in the right sounds at the right time and you needed to kinda keep to a theme and not be all over the place. Try to get a plan when you go to make a song instead of just adding what ever sounds nice.
Now for that girl’s song it was very good but it did have a bit of a problem of mixing together the sound volumes. As in sometimes the melody didn’t sound out all you just heard a bunch of noises without order. But for the most part it was a great song. I only wish it had a bigger drop for what it was.
Now for Guibo’s song, I found your song rather amusing. It was a type of song I would like to listen to while playing Castlevania. It had a good build up and change in melody without just having a large amount of sound everywhere destroying the theme. which of course you did excellent job sticking to that theme. The one thing you could add to make it even better, would be to not have so much repetition. I’m talking about that one melody where 3 notes go up in intervals and you just had that melody too long. after a while you needed to change it, which you eventually did but, just a little late, late enough that I got sick of the melody before you changed it in time.
And that my pupils is my opinion on the matter. Flies away
Heres the reason why my song is called “The works”, sure it might of been a last second decision but meh, I take the comments and things i need to fix/add and do it. I know im far from perfect but im getting there. With the limited sounds i have. its hard to find the perfect match to go with it.
I am currently editing it. so any more suggestions are much welcome!
Sorry for double posting but i have updated the song. (This comment will be merged when next post is made)
http://soundation.com/user/dopey39/track/the-works-edit-4
(link also in first post)