Swords Music of sorts

General
#1

After 22 hours (when i posted this) I showed to to some random people and they said they liked it. So here i am showing it to you guys. Thoughts?

http://soundation.com/user/swordmaster/track/summer-dance-v2#

#2

I really like it!!
I have no clue how you made that, but it’s awesome!! Good job!

#3

This is awesome! A real improvement on your previous ones :slight_smile:

#4

sounds really cool!

#5

This is actually really good! Good surprise! :slight_smile:

Listened to it 2 twice. Now it needs a decent title because summer dance V2 sucks. Something sleek :slight_smile:

#6

Title it; ‘Bringer of Summer’.

#7

Hell of an improvement to the stuff we’ve heard posted in music threads before. Sounds much more professionally done, less of the generic beats and sounds that everyone seems to do when they claim they can make music. A GG from me! :slight_smile:

#8

Yup, that was good. I like the early tapering off and the fade out at the end. A good beat overall.

#9 
 Sorry if this sounds a little mean but I just want to help you always improve your music so you can get closer and closer to perfection.  
 This for sure is a major improvement from your previous stuff and your using the right idea for formatting your song but there were a few things I noticed that you could improve on.  First thing is that your intro to the drop was a bit babyish with just having the same thing repeat and have some stuff add on and repeat that until it goes quite and then drop it, but you needed a more sudden drop and make it drop fucking hard.  Then try to make the build up more blended, so it doesn't sound mechanical and sorta babyish.  
 Then the actual music after the drop was a really nice blend and I loved it at first, but you really dragged it out, after some amazing sounding like that after you drop you can embellish on it but you need to have some other melodies to keep the song interesting and keep the listener wanting more.  When you just use the same exact melody/mixture over and over again, it gets annoying and boring.  Then ending was okay, its a normal way to end a song but to be more unique try a cooler way to end the song.  
 All together this was a major improvement on your older stuff but a little critique can always get you to learn about and make better music.
#10

Do remember, he’s using Sound Nation. Soundnation pretty much allows users too make music using lots of random pieces of music they have. As far as I remember, you cant actually compose your own tracks in it.

The music is good, however if you actually want to go somewhere with music creation. I strongly advise using Albeton Live or Fruity Loops. I have Massive and Albeton 8.2, however I’ve never made anything good enough to really show off.

#11

1: Soudation*
2: I cant afford any of those. I dont even have a job
3: Thanks for the support. I made this mainly w/o thinking and it took me like 30min to an hour to compose.

#12